My precious sleep … give it back . 40 chapters in and all I can say bout FL is .. misera...

HOLY+WATER October 22, 2023 8:11 pm

My precious sleep … give it back .
40 chapters in and all I can say bout FL is .. miserable.
Cant believe it was in the #strongFl list .
Ptsd is rightful after that but reading her lamenting for 40 ch straight got me depressed fr . Like at this point where’s the character development ??
I was only reading cuz I’m stubborn and the art is cute.
But dear author , see a therapist.
On top of the spoilers I got , with the characters dying, tried . Dear author , just get a story writer and focus on drawing.

Responses
    azial October 29, 2023 2:13 pm

    So it's no worthit?

    HOLY+WATER October 31, 2023 9:59 am
    So it's no worthit? azial

    Don’t .

    azial November 1, 2023 4:08 am
    Don’t . HOLY+WATER

    Aww Oki I was planning to read it because of the art that's a shame that the writing is shit

    HOLY+WATER November 3, 2023 4:17 pm
    Aww Oki I was planning to read it because of the art that's a shame that the writing is shit azial

    The art was indeed arting but it’s so slow. Come back when there 150 ch

    Ruji December 6, 2023 5:34 pm
    So it's no worthit? azial

    i pretty mush liked the story.i love it when the family feels deep regret about the mc and try their best to be good and mc doesn’t love them back.
    The family gets their memories back and the ml is the big brother,though they are not blood related.

    Mochi February 7, 2024 4:12 am

    I thought it was fine, I mean it did take a long time but that's all she knew, just her first life being treated like that since she was young, then finding out the only person she relied on was using her, and when she chose to unalive herself was her way of finally being free only to wake up again and see the people who hurt her the most. Her heart was deeply scarred so she wouldn't magically all of sudden be a badass, she was slowly learning to think more about herself, and especially now that hessaros was there who finally told her the words she always wanted to hear she Finally was able to have the courage to change. I know other similar stories the fml always goes straight for revenge, but sienna didn't want revenge she just wanted to suck it up and run away so it's understandable she didn't change and it took a while for her but she was slowly changing throughout the story.

    HOLY+WATER February 7, 2024 4:23 am
    I thought it was fine, I mean it did take a long time but that's all she knew, just her first life being treated like that since she was young, then finding out the only person she relied on was using her, and ... Mochi

    We’re soon 50ch in , it’s slow . Get what you’re saying but she’s so freaking negative , it’s depressing and a story with lack of character development isn’t it .

    Mochi February 7, 2024 4:33 am
    We’re soon 50ch in , it’s slow . Get what you’re saying but she’s so freaking negative , it’s depressing and a story with lack of character development isn’t it . HOLY+WATER

    Well yeah you're right but I feel like it's more realistic? It's pretty hard when you're depressed and negative for your whole life, it's hard to change or so etimes even realize how self loathing you are to yourself so I get that it's gunna take a while for her to change especially now that she has someone who encouraged her to start being a better person, when you're hurt you only see things badly as a defense mechanism so that you don't end up hurting more. Like already being disappointed and then when it happens you were right but at least you knew already so it doesn't feel disappointing as much, if you get what I mean

    Layla August 21, 2024 3:02 pm

    100% agreed with you holywater! I can think of a million other people who would do better with a 2nd life!

    If it was her 1st life I can understand her depression & moodiness. But it's her 2nd life & she knows all the dos & don'ts. But she doesn't take advantage of that.

    If the author really hated the Duke's family, she should have written a story with the FL running away to another family but all these thousand chapter of melancholy & self pity! Fuuuuuuckkk!

    Chap 1: I'm so pitiful

    Chap 2: look at me I'm so pitiful

    Chap 3: I'm soooo pitiful I can only sleep in the maid's room

    Chap 4: I'm soooo soooo pitiful that I was forced to do a ritual sacrifice with a pomegranate

    Chap 5: I'm super pitiful, look at my orphan clothes

    Chap 6: pityful me, Woe is me! I got a family again!...



    On and on till infinity ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍

    HOLY+WATER August 21, 2024 4:28 pm
    100% agreed with you holywater! I can think of a million other people who would do better with a 2nd life! If it was her 1st life I can understand her depression & moodiness. But it's her 2nd life & she... Layla

    THIS.
    you just reminded me of this waste of a story out there , rip to the art tho .