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ReverseHaremJutsu October 26, 2023 3:54 am

I haven’t finished ch 40 yet, but I feel like the expressions and the way the characters act are kind of off? like Jeong-min doesn’t have any facial expressions or…personality even? like every time something happens he just reacts and it feels like the story’s happening to him rather than him literally being a mc. Juwon has a little more of an actual personality, but his character is so ridiculous like how do these two characters have so many misunderstandings without an actual reason. ch 40 obviously they’ve reconciled but why are there just tears streaming down Juwon’s face while they have segs??? huhhhh?? like what is going on I can’t take this story or the characters seriously like it feels like i’m just supposed to look at how well the segs scenes and be like “rock on” but I wanted some… substance in the story? don’t get me wrong I love my 18+ scenes and buff bottoms, but when that’s all there is it just feels like author saw a ton of webtoon w thick bottoms and was like lemme hop on the train without creating actual character first. they not doing what a lot of new bl webtoon are doing w their plot and characters and it’s giving old webtoon stories with the most generic premise and segs scenes and even then there are multiple ones that actually do it in a fun way, just not this one

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    read_readnread November 1, 2023 4:03 am
    Idk why so many people disagree with you because I for one 100% understand what you mean by that but I don’t think the author wrote this without planning character development and personality for jeong-min I ... Yaoi_Freåk

    All valid points but there are genuinely pple like Jeong-min; I have a really good friend who's almost exactly like that has a great family too, difference is he talks more. I bawled in front of him after a bad breakup and bro stared at me for a hot min before asking if I wanted a hug and food after, mind you I couldn't reply with how hard I was crying, he took that as a sign to just stand there and anyone passing by, he told them I needed a good cry Some pple, no matter how they were raised or what experiences they've had, can still be bad at expressing themselves. Jeong-min's an awkward duck with a deadpan face, he just is.

    P.S: I still got my hug and food after