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I agree. I felt like there was something's and you said it... Chemistry. Also, the problem that the guy tied up just liked it instantly didn't feel right to me.
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I agree. I felt like there was something's and you said it... Chemistry. Also, the problem that the guy tied up just liked it instantly didn't feel right to me.
I am not sure what it is I don't like about this one. It has elements I usually enjoy-- bondage, a little edgy, tricky personalities. I don't mind fictional rape, depending on the context. I guess my problem is I don't feel chemistry between them and I don't particularly like either person. It was kind of like hentai but with two guys. All physical, and no sense of attraction or connection (however fucked up). Maybe I just hate that smiling type--I always find that creepy. Well, some people may like it--and that's cool. But for me, it's missing something.