That was so well done!!!

Ichigo October 31, 2023 10:18 pm

for a second there I was worried bro was gonna fuck up again after all the reflecting he's been doing, but I'm glad the author did it right! I've said this before but I'm very impressed by the writing and monologues. There's depth in every chapter and the main characters are multi-dimensional. Nakwon's character development has been one of the BEST I've ever seen so kudos to the author. probably not gonna happen but I'd love to see Mokhwa top him

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    Lalal November 1, 2023 12:07 am

    Ikr.. The police face is so topped - able.
    (Im biased, i like buff man on top)

    Ichigo November 1, 2023 8:35 pm
    Ikr.. The police face is so topped - able. (Im biased, i like buff man on top) Lalal

    haha that's not my reason but I respect it
    I was just thinking that it could really add something to the plot. like, it would be meaningful if Nakwon were to give his body to Mokhwa to show his feelings are genuine, especially given their history and the fact that he violated him multiple times in the past. At the very least, I feel Mokhwa should be given the choice because otherwise it would seem as taking advantage of his inexperience imo - if he's just pushed into a fixed position. As far as we know he has no experience with love or been in a consensual sexual relationship with anyone before, let alone with another man. Maybe never even had sexual urges at all... but I'm aware fiction doesn't always follow real life logic so it probably won't happen lol