Internal monologue hell

LadyEmily November 5, 2023 8:27 am

The author is going overboard with telling us(what happened to show not tell) EVERY SINGLE LITTLE thought Karlyle has. Please just for the love of god, move the plot forward. I dont even care if there's sex or not but its like get to the point already. How many fluffy conversations about the same thing can they have, jeez.

Responses
    IsolemRashlum November 5, 2023 8:59 am

    This manhwa is adapted from a novel where the story’s told mostly through Karlyle’s POV so that’s why there’re so many bubbles showing his thoughts (there’re also Ash’ POV too but it’s kinda little compared to Karlyle’s ones). I don’t mind seeing Karlyle’s thoughts tho, the thing matters is that the artist is taking things way too slow that somtimes it feels frustrating reading this, I also realized recent chapters are shorter too

    Sachyan November 5, 2023 10:37 am

    I know everyone is allowed to have their own opinion, but this particular opinion SUCKS BALLS

    kei November 5, 2023 11:47 am

    i wholeheartedly agree lol

    Rose November 5, 2023 3:54 pm

    AWW BUT I THINK ITS CUUUTEEE LIKKEE WE NEED SOME FLUFF OKAY

    LadyEmily November 6, 2023 11:44 am

    Fluff is not plot. I dont see why you cant have both fluff and the story consistently moving forward instead of stagnant. I could come back in 5 months and we'd probably still be in this limbo of nothing going on.