A few things I would like to point out in this BL

nickiq452 November 7, 2023 4:43 pm

This story has so much potential but the author keeps missing/dodging opportunities when it's around the corner TT, like I wish we had a more slower and smoother progression with the MC's introspection, like in the beginning when he got kissed by Woo-yeol, we saw how he was ig "unexpressive" because it was his first time coming to the real world and that never gets explained (as in that scene was never fully explored) and then later MC does a 180 with his personality where he can suddenly feel horny?????? Like I get it, but it feels so unnatural, especially Woo-yeol's. Like I don't want to sound like "eerm akshually" But c'mon, at least cover up some plotholes, and I really like this BL don't get me wrong, but the plot is going all over the place. One time we get some interesting lore drop, then the second it fizzes out and gets overlayed by unnecessary filler. This BL keeps EDGING ME. I cannot tell you how many times I was invested in the story only for it to be overshadowed by the same filler once again. Even after 31 chapters (as of now), we STILL don't know anything about literally everyone, I know it's to keep some mystery, but this is dragging and overdoing it at this point. Just give me the lore. I'm hungry. JUST GET TO THE STORY ALREADY.
Anyways, I'm sorry for yapping. Have a great day/night.

Responses
    dat_ass November 7, 2023 7:56 pm

    I can't tell you how much I agree with you. I have feeling the same way while reading this and it bothers me so much as this is such a unique concept and I wish it just done better

    mari November 8, 2023 8:53 am

    YES agreed. It also bothers me how silent MC is? He barely speaks and instead goes along with everything. Is that bc he’s a ghost-thing? We don’t know :,)

    nickiq452 November 8, 2023 7:48 pm
    YES agreed. It also bothers me how silent MC is? He barely speaks and instead goes along with everything. Is that bc he’s a ghost-thing? We don’t know :,) mari

    RIIIIGHT? I honestly wouldn't mind the MC being the silent type, but the fact that he's not giving Woo-yeol any hints or clues about himself is what frustrates me the most. Like he could've told Woo-yeol that one time when they were at the fast food restaurant that maybe he's never had a proper/good meal before and that could explain to Woo-yeol why the MC had such a big appetite????? Or maybe he could've just dropped a "I don't know my name" or "I don't know how old I am either" to Woo-yeol so that he could get a glimpse to his background??? The most basic things that would amplify their relationship more is just thrown out the window lool

    kiyo 清 November 10, 2023 5:21 am

    you're so real i feel the same way, but i mean i won't complain because i'll read it anyways ╥﹏╥