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27 years..
Yeah got a problem? I’m allowed to read
no problems mb thats just such a long time. if u dont mind me asking, how old are you?
Old as hell. My bones crack and my back is in constant pain if that helps
My honest review is:
Very bad beat for beat story telling. One second he’s in on the floor, next in his arms, next second he’s on the floor again. No in between, makes me confused if the panels got messed up.
Author-nim seems to write like the characters already know the plot in some way. Plus there’s not reason for him to be invested or so kind to MC. Being bored and having a plaything is fine to an extent as a reason but the weird sprinkles of romance is off when he’s had no need to be so thoughtful or even a monologue of why. Yeah okay, again he’s bored and it’s a business partnership, but one minute he’s rough and uses him more like a thing than a person then he’s just overly romantic again. Without reason. It’s just excessive floof cause we know they end up together maybe?
Also MC is so flippy floppy, one minute, so confident end next second, crying and scared. characters shouldn’t be one dimensional but this wasn’t quite right either.
1.5/5 stars - i don’t write reviews but I’ve never been so flabbergasted with a story and I’ve read A LOT in my 27 years of reading bl
I’ll keep reading it cause im curious about its progression, but it’s a cringe hard to get through read for me.
Also the comment section is meant for reviews of any kind good or bad. So if you disagree with me, that’s fine. Im not here to fight anyone nor will I respond to rude people. We all read a lot of things and love different stuff.