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Hello! I actually thought the plot of this was super similar to the story “Monster Duchess and Contract Princess” - only I liked the monster duchess one a whole lot more:
https://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/the_monster_duchess_and_contract_princess/
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So maybe you would too? Anyway! This might be too forward, but I have two lists of either male or female MC stories, and a lot of the female MC ones have a similar feel to this, if you’d like! Either way, happy reading!
https://www.mangago.zone/home/mangalist/1211332/
I think the plot line is cool (or started off cool) but I think it needs more depth into the characters and their relationship with each other [also kinda dislike the MC]
Like the MC's family fell in love with her (family love lol) on the 2nd day??? All coz he was abused before??? That's pity not love (not saying that love can't come from pity or vise versa) but the mom literally came from an abusive household too, ure telling me this is the 1st abused kid she's seen??? Like as an abused child (or someone with an abused childhood) u HAVE to know that there are millions of kids like that everywhere. But falling in love with the 1st kid within 2 days is crazy, I get that the mom sees herself in the MC but at that point it's more self love and projection, not actual family love [or at least to the extent they are showing it] (not saying the MC's family can't love her, obvi they can and do, but within 2 days is CRAZY and unrealistic)
I just skimmed the middle coz a lot of things were getting on my nerves (locking up a child in a cage coz he was cursed???), so there's def different aspects of her that I haven't seen, and I don't know the other characters that well either (like maybe her half sibling is evil or maybe the other women was lied to by the MC's dad and genuinely believed the wife was evil) but girl (aka MC) ur double standards are crazy: "I want to take everything away from my half sibling coz she's the daughter of my dad's wife and I was mistreated for being the daughter of my dad's ex wife" or "I didn't mean to tell u (an unstable little boy) to leave me alone forever [and result in u trying to kill urself], I just wanted to save myself, plz audience feel bad for me coz im still a good person who was in a silly goofy mood" [which I mean, valid, ure a little girl who is scared to die (expect ure not really a little girl are u)]
Hope the prince has a happy ending tho!! (And not turn into some psycho yandere or have a sadding ending these types of stories usually make the 2nd lead as)