I really like this story and this last chap was really good.... Until the last pages...I'm...

lily_nuit December 16, 2016 7:54 am

I really like this story and this last chap was really good.... Until the last pages...I'm kind of disappointed by this ending :S It's like the story have built a lot of pressure that have just... dry up :(

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    Undead December 16, 2016 8:42 am

    I agree.The tension was quite high nearing the end pages.
    I would've wanted more moments or say memories from the past years they were apart before hitting the last note.