Pasting my previous comment from when the detective dad was first introduced to see if my prediction will be correct soon:
" I know he hasn't done anything yet, and he's only appeared to play detective for Kowase's disappearance, BUT THAT'S EXACTLY IT! He'll be the plot device that's unexpected for our MC and will mess up the revenge process, trying to stop her because "they're just kids why are you going this far, you crazy criminal!" Line. Like, fuck off and let her actually do something for y'alls son instead of moping around and letting those crazy kids do more harm??
I have this huge hatred for self-righteous characters that are so attached to their job and principles without knowing the truth. My temper can't handle it. "
I really wanna see a calculated and perfectly executed revenge. There can be lil oopsies here and there, but nothing too major that drags and ruins everything or turns into a chummy ending.
Honestly the dad side was just irrelevant. I saw no point in having his “backstory” as a chapter if you aren’t gonna go in depth with it. Literally a whole chapter for this random man when we could’ve m... Marceline
The last part is so true lmao. I won't be rereading this after this from finishes. I just wanna see that psychotic bastard suffer,. honestly
Pasting my previous comment from when the detective dad was first introduced to see if my prediction will be correct soon:
"
I know he hasn't done anything yet, and he's only appeared to play detective for Kowase's disappearance, BUT THAT'S EXACTLY IT! He'll be the plot device that's unexpected for our MC and will mess up the revenge process, trying to stop her because "they're just kids why are you going this far, you crazy criminal!" Line. Like, fuck off and let her actually do something for y'alls son instead of moping around and letting those crazy kids do more harm??
I have this huge hatred for self-righteous characters that are so attached to their job and principles without knowing the truth. My temper can't handle it.
"
I really wanna see a calculated and perfectly executed revenge. There can be lil oopsies here and there, but nothing too major that drags and ruins everything or turns into a chummy ending.