The pacing is off but the concept is good.

saru December 19, 2023 11:52 am

The pacing is off but the concept is good.

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    Moon12 December 19, 2023 1:42 pm

    I feel like if it was more fleshed out, and a little longer it would be such a better story. Cause the pacing is kind of wonky and made me feel real confused about time passage and why the MC returned his feelings so fast even tho I guess a long time passed between the confession and the MC having feelings.

    saru December 19, 2023 5:50 pm
    I feel like if it was more fleshed out, and a little longer it would be such a better story. Cause the pacing is kind of wonky and made me feel real confused about time passage and why the MC returned his feeli... Moon12

    I agree. I was surprised when it suddenly said that they were fwb for 2 months already. Just confusing.