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Why do you keep putting commas in random places?...
Why make many sentence when you can have one big one.
You're still using the commas wrong in the first sentence. I.e., comma after the second Hikaru instead of after "is" and there doesn't need to be a command after is/before interesting.
I wonder how much of Hikaru is, Hikaru and how much is brainsnatcher, I think the premise of so easily trusting Hikaru (mostly) as an audience is, interesting but it also allows the author to pull the rug from under our feet. Perhaps the reason the brainsnatcher went along with Hikaru's whims is because it was Yoshiko, who bares an resemblance to the decapitated head from the past, and thus is somehow related to brainsnatchers past?. Regardless, to lose your memory and do things that seem more monstrous rather than Hikaru like, is suspicious and makes me wonder how much can we really trust Hikaru?