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Id die in a few minutes xD only cause id prolly somehow find my way into a drug deal or something or maybe even get robbed idk but id die earlier then most kinda funny to thnk about. When i was 10 hm id say i was a lot like Luffy from One Piece
The story has been done before, and been done better. Firstly, the fight scenes are just a mish-mash of flashy pretty colours on the panels. It's hard to actually see what's going on. Secondly, the protagonist becomes strong...way too fast. Like, he's 10 years old and masters the sword. He then continues on to beat a huge snake while merely using it for practice, goes out into the world AT TEN YEARS OLD (try and remember what you were like at 10, then imagine being like that and travelling the world solo...) and in that same year beats a HUGE super strong rhino and even fights and chases away the demon beast leader of that area. I mean...I get it, he's special and all that. But seriously? Why not just make him OP right away if you're going from harmless child to super badass 'I can beat anything' within a few chapters?