Conflict and action. The sex is a bit tedious that it makes you lowkey forget the entire basis of the story tbh
Exactly
the conflict is there. there's also a little bit of action. it's just that this is a problem with a lot of yaoi / sex focused story. the sex just happens because of it? it's not a result of something brewing or showing any sign that it will effecting something. like you can take out the sex scene and it won't effecting the plot so it just makes it so bland? it kinda disturb any point the author wants to say. ig it's ashame, bcs at first the plot looks pretty intriguing.
Oh I forgot to add more in front of conflict and action LOLL but yeah a lot of the sex scenes aren’t even remotely connected to the plot at all so it just seems like fillers
yeah exactly. also didn't realize you are THE seph. thank you for uploading girlie
LOLL no problem at all!! I like to read the topics sometimes especially on the stuff I upload to help people understand or any questions they might have
So far there's no plot.
like this has potential but i feel like im missing something. is it the writing? i feel like it is