chapter was cringe af

levipleasecallmeback January 31, 2024 5:12 am

the sudden mood swings were crazy. we went from serious to sudden bawling, business prospects ?? then flirting and confession. what is going on with the story progression… i didn’t expect much but the unfolding of this chapter had no flow and felt choppy

the story had potential so i’ve been sticking it out but the dumb and simple characters and bad writing turn me off

Responses
    Anie February 9, 2024 11:08 am

    You gotta give everything in those one week right? Haha right?

    baragonhun February 9, 2024 11:11 am

    You can read the novel on foxaholic. Name is: I became the lousy side top