why is dark fall's plot and art more coherent than this

Or maybe you're too stupid to get it. Because it's pretty obvious.

or maybe you're too stupid to understand that coherent is defined as "logical" or "consistent". not "incomprehensible" and "unintelligible".

oh but you wouldnt know plot delivery and consistency in art!!!

honestly its utter garbage.

and how about you grow a pear of sacks and open up your reply system, dipshit. behaving like those over religious people with brochures in malls.

reading your comments make me develop down syndrome.

shit take

Yeah, the plot really is straight forward. I don't get what's confusing about it lol Dark fall would be tagged "plot what plot" or porn w/out plot" on AO3 XD

For lmaooo

For real* lmaooo

lwky u a weirdo if this story n art is better than df