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I agree! I feel like it was very rushed at the end, but it still was so good and I really hope there are side stories!!!
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I agree! I feel like it was very rushed at the end, but it still was so good and I really hope there are side stories!!!
The last 3 chapters to the end felt rushed. I think it would have been nice to make them smoother but I guess there was a fixed amount of chapters from the beginning
I wanted to dwell more in the past memories and Lucerne knowing what happened to their child in Elisha past life. She shouldn't have healed from that trauma in a chapter, specially because that was the reason she separate from Lucerne to begin with, the guilt that was eating her alive. But then it got rushed to the side