starting to hate this

9158 February 17, 2024 3:17 pm

except the artstyle, everything else sucks ass :/ like the plot almost feels forced, i don't even wanna talk about the personalities and the sex is forced as well, almost like rape. i am aware of the fact that this is the first work of this author but the story still isn't all that appealing compared to other bl stories. i also know that there are even worse or even better bls out there but hey, for me even this story ain't all that good tbh

(apologies for any mistakes regarding the language)

Responses
    Bureau of InvASStigation February 18, 2024 11:27 am

    Agreed though I see potential for greatness if they focused on one thing or the other because the plot is all over the place and the personalities could use some sprucing up.

    9158 February 18, 2024 4:53 pm
    Agreed though I see potential for greatness if they focused on one thing or the other because the plot is all over the place and the personalities could use some sprucing up. Bureau of InvASStigation

    exactly because it's almost confusing as well (your username has me on the floor )