I enjoyed it but....

TiredOfLife February 19, 2024 1:33 am

This couldve been better. Im guessing that this story was intended to be within a short manwha format, but it feels like 2 completely seperate stories were told to me. IMO this couldve been better executed if the previous life was integrated as flash backs and memories in the modern life, as opposed to just- well- telling the story in two different seasons.

Again, liked the story, but it couldve been told differently

Responses
    Thatweirdchick February 19, 2024 1:33 am

    Well said. I agree

    TiredOfLife February 19, 2024 1:36 am

    I wanna give roses and flowers to the creators of course, from what mangago is listing, its their first manwha. They have a lotta potential and itll be cool to see what they make next!

    Thatweirdchick February 19, 2024 1:40 am
    I wanna give roses and flowers to the creators of course, from what mangago is listing, its their first manwha. They have a lotta potential and itll be cool to see what they make next! TiredOfLife

    That is impressive for sure!! I'm sure the next one will be even better!

    Nobody February 19, 2024 5:15 am

    Yes, exactly, or at least end this side story with the characters back in the present.