Same giiirl!!! My 1st thought was: bish what ya mean put things in place? From what I've seen the only thing out of place id the OgFl that should've been in the grave like 20 lives ago? I think OgFl is right, that girl is dang cursed alright? She's not bad but she's certainly dumping her misfortune on Fl and Ml to stay alive... all sheet that happened to mc all her previous lives wouldn't make sense otherwise. I also kinda doubt Ml was in romantic love with OgFl... maybe a sense of responsibility?
Honestly, no matter how nice OgFl is. Fact is she died all 19 times because of her! Bish I'd have held such a massive grudge in her stead that I'd be like... the world will be destroyed? Fine by be! I'd rather have that than infinite loop of hell!
The first two chapters had me, everything’s after that tho is a huge red flag. What do you mean you have to fix the story??? Girl you were MURDERED NINETIETH TIMES! Your sister can go through one life cursed.