Ummm

Alexis180 March 13, 2024 1:07 am

Started off so strong … then wiggled a bit … then got really random and weird. So many unused plot points … the cafe guy …. The seme being a “ gangster”etc the plot was so rushed and all over the place couldn’t been great if they took their time a bit more.

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    FuckedMyWayUpToTheTop March 14, 2024 3:20 am

    Exactly my thoughts. The plot was set up perfectly, but executed so poorly and a lot of potential was wasted. I'm disappointed, wasted a whole night for this lol

    totaadcc March 16, 2024 8:33 am

    You hit the point! There were really many points to work on it:
    1)The bar guy - maybe an omega/stalker like who fell in love with the mc omega;
    2) the gang part - only for the big tattoo on the alpha back?! Or for the bodyguards?!
    3) well Don’t we talk about seeing kkoong that this ending made me reeeeally mad after *sniff kongkong

    totaadcc March 16, 2024 8:35 am
    Exactly my thoughts. The plot was set up perfectly, but executed so poorly and a lot of potential was wasted. I'm disappointed, wasted a whole night for this lol FuckedMyWayUpToTheTop

    Yes…. me too… #WeAllinThisTogether