Wow, that was one ugly, corny end!! And I honestly really didn't like her when she said "I...

Clerell February 8, 2013 9:45 pm

Wow, that was one ugly, corny end!! And I honestly really didn't like her when she said "I'm not pretty, unlike xy" in self-pity. Man, these heroines need to respect themselves more!
The story was ok I guess. Just that these points irked me

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    Noodles February 17, 2017 8:09 am

    Blame her ex. She should pick herself but the way her ex broke with her did damage her, mentally.