I like it when enemies to lovers is romantic from the start. It looks weird when it become...

sarcasticpotato March 24, 2024 7:35 pm

I like it when enemies to lovers is romantic from the start. It looks weird when it becomes romantic randomly after a chapter. At least would prefer a bit progress shown rather than a switch up so fast. So hard to believe that they r interested in each other.

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    DaddyMilkers March 25, 2024 8:00 am

    Romance... you... you think this is romance?? Like, the Roman's version or Hollywood tv version?

    sarcasticpotato March 25, 2024 8:35 am
    Romance... you... you think this is romance?? Like, the Roman's version or Hollywood tv version? DaddyMilkers

    You think you are funny? lol

    Justme March 25, 2024 1:16 pm

    Yeah,but where is the communication? Its been a while and they have talked like five words and its not going anywhere. They know nothing about eachother. He has no care for his dignity as a human and its being going nonstop. Not even a kiss,he called him a bitch, but he is the bitch.
    And the way he has treated him goes beyond being enemies,at least it going to be slow for sure.
    He might change when he starts to see him as more as a sex toy. But he is still the one person who stepped on his dignity.

    sarcasticpotato March 25, 2024 1:31 pm
    Yeah,but where is the communication? Its been a while and they have talked like five words and its not going anywhere. They know nothing about eachother. He has no care for his dignity as a human and its being ... Justme

    Show for sure? Just explain the stupid elevator scene for mc, you cant. And my friend, lack of communication you say, that is the bad writing.

    sarcasticpotato March 25, 2024 1:32 pm
    Show for sure? Just explain the stupid elevator scene for mc, you cant. And my friend, lack of communication you say, that is the bad writing. sarcasticpotato

    Slow*

    Justme March 25, 2024 1:58 pm
    Show for sure? Just explain the stupid elevator scene for mc, you cant. And my friend, lack of communication you say, that is the bad writing. sarcasticpotato

    The elevator scene? Common now. He was looking for a caring touch where it isnt. So what about when he fucked him as he was having a panic attack in the pool? You liked that?

    sarcasticpotato March 25, 2024 2:21 pm
    The elevator scene? Common now. He was looking for a caring touch where it isnt. So what about when he fucked him as he was having a panic attack in the pool? You liked that? Justme

    You really struggle with not understanding what you read. I talk about bad writing. You ask me if i LIKE it? Girl, go back to school. And stop overanalysing the bad writing in your own head. The writing is not deep, its just bad, bland and boring.