I give up

lostikins March 26, 2024 9:09 pm

They shoulda made the brother the main conflict from the get-go.

Cut the entire enslaved rabbits bs plot point that was just goofy as hell and replace it with Haru and Neungso dealing with the kingdom.

I felt like the whole enslaved rabbit bs was weirdly outta place to begin with and knew that they had to tie up loose ends with the kingdom since the brother was suspicious of Neungso the whole time after he left. Woulda shaved like 30 chapters off this series' lifespan and left more room for character building for the others and world building.

Tf do you mean we're at the tail end of the series and JUST NOW learning about the moon rabbit venom lol that feels like such an important detail for the moon rabbits and it's just arbitrarily added in at the last minute for a convenient plot device.

I'm tired, dawg.

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    lostikins March 26, 2024 9:16 pm

    Also, I am officially annoyed with Haru. Like, I get where they are going with this 'cause *someone* with authority needed to stand up to the kingdom and force them to change their outdated traditions, but he's literally continuously putting Neungso on the spot with his decisions and expecting him to be able to tank all the damage.

    It feels like the plot point that should have been the main conflict ((the kingdom, brother and the moon rabbit traditions)) are being treated like a side conflict with how awkward all the pieces are falling into place.

    Fucking bite the brother, hold him hostage, demand that the moon rabbit have autonomy and the right to choose their mate or the prince dies, I guess save Habibi and then go be happy with Neungso.

    Haru's main issue with revealing why he bit her in the first place was that he thought the kingdom might not help her instead of it being that she was getting physically violent despite everyone trying to calm her down which resulted in him biting her.

    Idek. This whole final arc is just messy.