I feel like there’s missing information and as well as in general it feels like there’...

Erys April 2, 2024 4:34 pm

I feel like there’s missing information and as well as in general it feels like there’s things that are missing.
Like at the start, his reactions, and the way that he went about things just feels a little bit unnatural like the grasp for information wasn’t really there that you would have in that situation . he feels a little bit like a Marionette.

But I didn’t really finish up to the part that everybody is at now wanna come to reading I stopped. Because of this I’m not that far off though from where everybody is.

He a character that like he’s right above water very non-interesting in certain ways like he’s not trying to do anything it’s weird the way that he eats his follows without question without thought if you think about it and

that he feels like he just possessing that body and (even if he is) and not that he possibly just remembered his past life that he doesn’t question himself or that he’s so unattached from all the other characters like his siblings, his parents, even the potential targets. he doesn’t see them like the they are now his family they’re not just this person in this person. They are now his family they see him like that. They will cry for him. He doesn’t see the severity of everything. I don’t think he properly gets it. I know that the siblings can be annoying, but still the fact that he feels so accomplished when he lies to them. Even if to spare their feelings it’s weird.

His actions feels like he’s an adult and other times he’s a child and other times he doesn’t realize that he’s a child it’s very weird weird and he feels like I said before a puppet it’s strange maybe it’s just me, but the author makes me feel like they don’t know how to properly write a BL guy in this specific situation. It’s just not hitting right.
He doesn’t act like a guy. But this is just my opinion. I just wanted to share it but don’t get mad if you think it’s amazing or whatever because it is good it’s just missing something.

Responses
    Inka April 3, 2024 11:04 pm

    I also felt jarred by how the story gets started, but it seems like you barely got past chapter one. I chalk it up to a clumsy advantage of the popularity of this trope, that some webcomics' protsgonists adapt to these sorts of situations with the coolness of "damn, it's like those webnovels that are everywhere in my modern world, gotta gather information." It is fascinating that you see him as like a puppet and view his actions as wrong and contradictory, I guess there are differences in perspectives here on the behaviors of reincarnated/transmigrated characters. Personally, I think it must be hard to see complete strangers as anything but. It's like a person waking up with amnesia, how do you expect them to feel love for family members just because they're told they should? And on the point of his behavior, I'll say maybe some people would agree that he should act more or less like an adult/child, but I'll add my two cents that in the way webcomics are drawn, too, most characters young and old will start seeming childish haha. If he was drawn as a teenager, I think his behaviors will seem just as appropriate/plausible. And it cannot be helped if he is somewhat affected by having to live as a kid. Anyways, these are just my thoughts! But it cannot be helped if this comic does not have what you look for in a story or a BL.

    Erys April 4, 2024 12:10 am

    Actually, I am at chapter 19 it’s not like. I would make a comment like that and only be at chapter 1 it’s a little ridiculous after one chapter to write that much to begin with

    Also, it has less to do with the type because I usually like the difference when they’re not all the same. I think it’s just his attitude that I don’t enjoy and how he goes about it by the way, I don’t think he has to love them like family I just think that he should at least it’s the way that he thinks about them is annoying and like he hast to fake it all the time like he doesn’t question his environment at all and that kind of pisses me off a little bit. It’s the fact that you don’t question the environment you’re in it feels to me dangerous it feels like you’re diluting yourself. That’s why I see him as a puppet is a self mechanism to the situation he’s in but because of that I don’t enjoy it , as I would like to the way that he’s kind of weirdly suede by everybody else, but it feels like he’s genuinely following a story and I don’t usually like that Like the program system that he has is making him follow a specific story the fact that I don’t know there’s something weird that I don’t like specifically and it’s not just his attitude

    Erys April 4, 2024 12:12 am

    Not lied to their faces because of the system. I did not finish my sentence there at least learn to say oh I like you instead of I love you I don’t like that he constantly has to feel like he hast to lie. It might just be because I find slight parallels, I feel like he’s faking a lot of the things he says For self defense because he feels the dread of everything that’s happening and in that regard I don’t like it that because it feels too parallel to real life in some regards or something else. It’s been a little bit since I read it and I read too many so I might’ve confused this a little bit but that’s what I feel right now when I think about it, it might change , but I’m still gonna like it like I thought I would enjoy it

    Lovelykei April 4, 2024 4:06 am

    Actually if you catch up he does questions the whole world and how if he makes decisions based on how they are supposed to go for each route, he feels like the people that have to live with his choices are nothing more than characters in a game then real people and he doesn’t want that or doesn’t want that for the people around him