I LOVE this manhwa, but... (SPOILER FROM CH84)

Vinland Refugee April 12, 2024 2:01 am

The latest sex scenes look like they came straight from a hentai. The sex looks too violent and painful.
I know Taeju is kind of a beast, but I think it'd be so much better if this scene was fluffier.
That's only my opinion though.

Responses
    shalalala April 12, 2024 2:18 am

    i agree, and why do all the scenes turn non consensual at some point? its such a mood killer -_-

    Ur welcome April 12, 2024 2:18 am

    I agree. I’m just kinda confused why the author went back on taeju’s word of “not doing euihyung won’t like”. That whole sex scene would of been better if euihyung did like it or if taeju stopped.
    Hell, the whole telling euihyung to live with him was cringe too. I mean, I’m happy that euihyung is happy and doesn’t seem to mind living with taeju (even though he was pressured) but man, the author could of done that better.

    shithead April 12, 2024 2:25 am

    right it felt like the author was holding on her horneiness, since she hasn't wrote smut in like 30 chapters and just let it go all it once. it's so out of character for the omega, he wasn't even like that in his heat

    shithead April 12, 2024 2:28 am
    I agree. I’m just kinda confused why the author went back on taeju’s word of “not doing euihyung won’t like”. That whole sex scene would of been better if euihyung did like it or if taeju stopped.Hell... Ur welcome

    sammmee. I had some hope that the author will take her time and write better pacing, but nope reading the first few chapters of 3rd season I know this will be disappointing....it is like slowly washing away the omega's personality...

    RiBa April 12, 2024 2:36 am

    Then this comics isn't suitable for you taste tho..... From the start he is really a beast

    RiBa April 12, 2024 2:37 am
    sammmee. I had some hope that the author will take her time and write better pacing, but nope reading the first few chapters of 3rd season I know this will be disappointing....it is like slowly washing away the... shithead

    Isn't author work to caught up all your expectations

    shithead April 12, 2024 2:40 am
    Isn't author work to caught up all your expectations RiBa

    god forbid someone does some criticism right?

    shithead April 12, 2024 2:42 am
    Then this comics isn't suitable for you taste tho..... From the start he is really a beast RiBa

    not when half the 2nd season and the whole 3rd season being a redemption ark for him

    RiBa April 12, 2024 11:32 am
    not when half the 2nd season and the whole 3rd season being a redemption ark for him shithead

    : ( but I think author has a kink of this kind of stuff let's just wait if author change her concept

    RiBa April 12, 2024 11:35 am
    god forbid someone does some criticism right? shithead

    I am just saying isn't author work to caught up all our expectations... Tho....

    RiBa April 12, 2024 11:36 am
    I agree. I’m just kinda confused why the author went back on taeju’s word of “not doing euihyung won’t like”. That whole sex scene would of been better if euihyung did like it or if taeju stopped.Hell... Ur welcome

    Some bottom is like they will say they don't like it but inside they like it teaju is really a beast and author has a kink of this kind of stuff

    Vinland Refugee April 12, 2024 11:53 am
    Some bottom is like they will say they don't like it but inside they like it teaju is really a beast and author has a kink of this kind of stuff RiBa

    I got that from when Taeju said he can say that Euihyun likes it by his scent, but it still gives me the eeck. It might be the authors kink, but it stinks of rape culture.

    shithead April 12, 2024 12:02 pm
    I am just saying isn't author work to caught up all our expectations... Tho.... RiBa

    yeah both can be right at the same time. authors shouldn't just write to please the audience, and readers shouldn't only read what they like. with that being said, it doesn't mean that the author is exempt from criticism, regardless of the plot and regardless if the reader likes the plot, there are things that can be criticized regardless of the work's nature, plot, story, references.

    if you think any criticism as an attack to the work or coming from negative place then why teach writing and story telling to begin with? since you think authors should just write what they like and forget about pacing, charisma, personalities ect.
    it is insane to write this long of a paragraph just to tell you that it is okay to criticize the media you consume or "art" if you even can call bl art lol

    Ur welcome April 12, 2024 1:40 pm
    Some bottom is like they will say they don't like it but inside they like it teaju is really a beast and author has a kink of this kind of stuff RiBa

    I get that but I prefer an actual confirmation that euihyung likes it or that euihyung didn’t want taeju to stop.
    The sex scene was fine in the first 2 chapters, then later it was getting cringe where euihyung was asking taeju to stop and him saying “I thought you’ll stop if i didn’t like it”, where as taeju responded saying “your body doesn’t want me to stop or something like that”. In addition to that, there was also the whole pressuring euihyung to live with him to.
    The author can keep doing beast taeju but a sex scene is better when the two partners both like it and that consent is involved (meaning that they’re shouldn’t be a partner that wants to stop midway and say they don’t like it).
    There’s plenty of yaoi’s that where the top is a beast in bed but would stop if the bottom doesn’t like it or is in pain. I wanted taeju to be like that bc he’s changing from the bad taeju.