Honestly, I didn't know what bara meant. So thanks for that, but I kinda suspected that's what it meant.(⌒▽⌒) Jazz
bara manga means gay manga written by gay men, so a lot of bara tends to be very muscular and hairy. the author of this is female, so it's not actually bara, just the style is very muscular
I loved the plot, but the guys were ALL too macho. I mean macho is good, but it should be mixed up a little more.
I guess what I'm trying to say is to make it more realistic, a bit less macho