Great Premise

Amberwaves February 10, 2017 4:38 pm

I really think this has a great premise, and I can't wait to see how the story unfolds. I don't know if it was something in how it was translated or just a rather quirky and cryptic way of doing dialogue in the original, but I found much of the first chapter difficult to follow and confusing as to what precisely was going on.

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    akuma_river February 10, 2017 5:09 pm

    It's poetic and it's hard to translate that to English without it feeling disjointed.