Just one criticism

SugarySugar May 31, 2024 11:20 pm

Maybe an unpopular opinion but I was hoping for a bit of a redemption arc for Hyunjae. Not necessarily a "he becomes a good person and lives happily ever after" but I was sorta hoping to see him come out of prison and move on with his life and find peace somewhere else.

Our MC was horrible person im his past life and had a second chance to do it all again so it just sucks to see that other bad people who were just as bad never got their second chance

Story was great otherwise! Love Nokyoung's and Junil's healthy relationship

Responses
    SugarySugar June 1, 2024 12:15 am

    Just another thing to add: I loved how cute the ending was. I hope someday Nokyoung can be honest to Junil about how he actually came back from the past rather than the whole "I can tell the future" thing but regardless, I loved how the ending brought everything to a close.

    Ciel Lee June 2, 2024 5:36 pm

    I actually agree to this! I mean author-nim can just make another story for a redemption arc for Hyunjae but not making them get back with Nokyung, instead another story for him as how he makes up woth his past and finally knows how to cherish someone he loves. Cuz he got the potential tho like

    SugarySugar June 2, 2024 6:34 pm
    I actually agree to this! I mean author-nim can just make another story for a redemption arc for Hyunjae but not making them get back with Nokyung, instead another story for him as how he makes up woth his past... Ciel Lee

    Yes exactly! I definitely don't want a story of him competing with Nokyoung, that would be terrible. But seeing him maybe finding someone of his own and learning to treat them right would be perfect. He was already redeeming himself when he gave Junil the USB, and it showed him being well-behaved in prison too.