The story have great potential but i really hope ot focus to one of them ...or else i twil...

Becky June 18, 2024 5:54 am

The story have great potential but i really hope ot focus to one of them ...or else i twill go all over the place

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    Piper June 18, 2024 10:51 pm

    I actually like how there's a few different plot points going on. Too many books only focus on the MC and don't develop the characters around MC unless MC is also with them

    Becky June 19, 2024 3:43 am
    I actually like how there's a few different plot points going on. Too many books only focus on the MC and don't develop the characters around MC unless MC is also with them Piper

    Totally agree on that part ...i like side couples too...but the frequency is too high like one chapter each which is making me loose the focus they can do it like 10chap solid mc couples then 5couples...nevertheless the i will still read it after all its authors choice (⌒▽⌒)