Glad I'm not the only one not enjoying this. I want to but it's too all over the place. Th...

Baby Gravy June 19, 2024 8:36 am

Glad I'm not the only one not enjoying this. I want to but it's too all over the place. The sex also feels forced and like Tae isn't liking it especially having a longer round of sex after they already had a lot of sex for his first time, I've done that irl and believe me when you're sore that second even longer round is not happening. It made me cringe out of existence imagining the pain.

Also just constantly going along with Rion's whims just because he cries (and he cries A LOT), acting like you're buddies again when you don't remember who he even is, getting MARRIED and having no issues with it when ya'll are still figuring eachother out... And that whole "my brother is iniured" just to force it out. Holy hell. The plot needs way more fleshing out.

Responses
    Vibess June 24, 2024 12:52 am

    Then don't read the author is known for their sexual manwhas lol

    Grey Goo June 24, 2024 1:50 am
    Then don't read the author is known for their sexual manwhas lol Vibess

    They chose to write porn with plot, not just porn. Thus the plot can be criticized.

    Baby Gravy June 25, 2024 11:00 am
    Then don't read the author is known for their sexual manwhas lol Vibess

    I'm fine with sexual manhwas but like Grey Goo mentioned, don't try to write in plot with it then. I'm fine with a stupid quickly rushed story if we get to the action, it's funny a lot of the time, but trying to write a "deep" plot that is just bad, just do the quick and stupid pls ╥﹏╥