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frey not being able to recognize ceos car actually does me sense to me because 1) he heard we him say his sisters name that he has been tryin to find for a good while so he zeroed in on that
2) it was dark out, so midnight, when he ran into him and dependin on the color of the car it looks different at night especially when theres no other light source but the moon
3) i dont even think they were sittin upfront but were in the back seat.
if this comes off as rude or anythin of the sort m sorry (;テ﹏テ)
I think the car hijacking part is just badly written. So the blondie is so good at stealing expensive foreign cars that he was able to turn it into a career. He’s been doing it for years and never been caught. So it should be that hijacking and finding his sister are the only things he takes seriously. BUT apparently for hijacking there is no prep work, no scoping out a mark, no checking who it belongs to and coming up with a plan. He just… just finds a random expensive car and breaks in? No cap or face coverings, getting his dna all over the car and letting his very striking appearance be exposed? He also apparently doesn’t recognize cars he’s seen before.
If the car thing never comes up again, fine I’ll let it go. It just bothers me, personal nitpick, when an author gives someone a unique hobby or “career” but then obviously put no thought into it other than “that’s different”. This says nothing about the overall arching story btw, it could still be good, just this one particular writing choice bothers me.