I love how the POV is mixed. Like 90% ML POV and 10% FL POV. It's like, everytime it switc...

Ruri July 3, 2024 6:05 pm

I love how the POV is mixed. Like 90% ML POV and 10% FL POV. It's like, everytime it switches to FL it's like a little treat to get to see what she's thinking, especially since the ML is so curious about her, making the reader just as curious.
Most other stories will have FL POV for most of the story and ML POV towards the end or he'll have a random thought bubble here and there. So I like how in this story, FL will have a whole chapter dedicated to her POV from time to time.

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    your nanny September 15, 2024 1:01 am

    Yeah, makes her less of a 2d and without personality character