Responses
I thought it was just me about the pacing! Wanted to read it and I feel like I’ve read similar stories that accomplish the same plot points but with different pacing more effectively. I feel like a lot and little happened at the same time which confused me and lots of points of distraction (like it took me a min to realize his gf’s name and that she worked at the bath before
The pacing of this one is so bizarre, made it quite difficult to comprehend a lot of the character’s thoughts/motivations despite it seeming like a simple “guy meets guy” story. I think this is more than just a translation issue.