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Mwahaminimi August 2, 2024 10:32 am

Idk what it is, but something about this story just makes it meh. I think the author tried to put so much in a story, but didn't do it clean enough to the point that it seemed forced, so at that point it got kinda boring.

After they got attacked by those S classes, so much seems to be forgotten and brushed off. The characters are cute together, but honestly, that's the only thing I'm interested in at this point. Everything else doesn't flow well and has WAY too much that it and makes it boring. Also, I give it a 3 star.

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    Lesllie August 1, 2024 5:09 am

    It’s because there’s literally no rising action. There should be no reason 30 chapters into the story there’s no imminent threat or antagonist. It’s like we’re just watching the characters hang out.

    I can’t even consider the romance the rising action because they’re basically already a couple, there’s nothing in the way of their romance.

    The shit is boring af

    Mwahaminimi August 1, 2024 4:39 pm

    I think it's also the fact that they quickly resolve a thing and leave no room for growth of the characters. There's hardly any climatic moment of the plot. And when things get quickly resolved they try to add another issue spontaneously, and handle it so quick. It's like having to many quickies in a relationship!

    Potato August 2, 2024 6:05 am

    I feel like it’s just soooo over dramatic and the fact that that one weird dude was the main villain for 60 chs. Was so stupid

    Mwahaminimi August 3, 2024 1:53 am

    Finished it... The ending was just so weird.... What's his name is not necessarily useless... But the fact that he was such a damsel bothered me.

    Mwahaminimi August 3, 2024 1:54 am
    I feel like it’s just soooo over dramatic and the fact that that one weird dude was the main villain for 60 chs. Was so stupid Potato

    I agree... He had no true rhyme or reason. It was so weird!

    PatrickStar August 3, 2024 7:28 am

    No you’re right. It’s a perfect B-

    PatrickStar August 3, 2024 7:37 am

    Also, the most interesting characters are so sidelined like the short haired AA girl and the leader of the guild, the female S esper, short haired muscly guy from the guild. Every single character apart from the main two are more interesting and that’s a huge issue with the writing.

    Mwahaminimi August 4, 2024 12:29 am
    Also, the most interesting characters are so sidelined like the short haired AA girl and the leader of the guild, the female S esper, short haired muscly guy from the guild. Every single character apart from th... PatrickStar

    Dude... That girl with the double powers or whatever was very random. It never went into more detail about that. It just doesn't give much about the side couple or even more so about the side characters enough to make the plot make sense.
    I swear, this was written by a 19 year old woman with not a lot of experience with relationships and good story telling.