Agreed.
Yeah,, I felt it that way too. It is leaking in many ways. If we suppose to understand that, as you said, the author hasnt been able to express it.
Yeah, I didn't really bother reading the second novel. The story just felt too flat after the first volume and I got bored.
Yeah, got that feeling too. Had good intentions and had parts that would make it a good manga but the lack of interconnection and explanation just made me sit here like " what was the plot again?" It was all over the place and not in a good way.
So what, are we supposed to understand that up till now, he was thinking of him as his brother ? Even though they were fucking ? Even though they confessed to each other ?
He only just now fell in love/lust because of his new haircut ?
Sorry I'm playing dumb on purpose but this development is kind of ridiculous.It's like the author doesn't know where to go with the story.