Well technically speaking…

Nonobi14 August 19, 2024 2:53 pm

Story: why not, let’s see where it leads to. (Like we all already don’t know…)
Technically: The uke is draw like a girl. I get it that the artist wants the reader to feel the fragility of the MC but this is really exaggerated. There’s nothing manly in him, it’s just a girl with a d. Draw a girl instead. The seme is gorgeous but his hand are like two meters each. Seme himself is like 3 meters. lol. And personal taste but that bulge in the stomach because of seme big d is soooo absolutely impossible. How can the seme even walk with an anaconda like this, does he walks it like a dog every morning?
I know it’s fantasy but this is sooo exagerated that instead of feeling empathy for the MC I just keep on laughing on those impossible proportions.
Anyway, still the artist made a good job, helped by the story, so no more complaints!

Responses
    MyKeiichiMaya August 19, 2024 7:33 pm

    Lol. Walk like a dog.
    I also never judge any manga, be it toxic or whatever I don't explain on any story. But like you said their body proportions is tooooo much l, way too much. The mc is sucking a dick which is almost the half size of his head! How can you put that thing in your mouth. Your lips can become a Titan lips before sucking the whole thing.

    Nonobi14 August 20, 2024 12:31 am
    Lol. Walk like a dog. I also never judge any manga, be it toxic or whatever I don't explain on any story. But like you said their body proportions is tooooo much l, way too much. The mc is sucking a dick which... MyKeiichiMaya

    Ha ha ha right! :)