This author really loves angry makeup sex huh..ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~

Marliplanetz August 26, 2024 8:51 pm

This author really loves angry makeup sex huh..ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~

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    AWinterWonderLand September 1, 2024 5:58 pm

    Ooo u mean they have other works out?!?

    Marliplanetz September 1, 2024 6:56 pm
    Ooo u mean they have other works out?!? AWinterWonderLand

    Yess!! There’s another short story they made if you go under to the authors others you’ll see it’s the one with the guys doing taekwondo!!

    AWinterWonderLand September 2, 2024 7:02 am

    So apparently the author lives the older bottom with missing memories trope. And this one doesn't have the feels. I think the author likes to drag out the suspense too much.

    The art is good but not much on the chemistry. The author drags out the misunderstanding a lot but it seemed forced. In both stories.

    AWinterWonderLand September 2, 2024 7:02 am

    *loves

    Marliplanetz September 2, 2024 4:14 pm

    Yeppp basically and it always ends up with them making up in that “way” . But then again I can’t say much because it was intended to be a short story so I guess maybe that’s why there isn’t as much plot or chemistry they could put in? ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍

    AWinterWonderLand September 2, 2024 10:18 pm

    Even this longer story. But no. I've seen a lot of short stories with MUCH more impact than this. These are just watered down versions. I'll see if I can recall some and I'll let you know. Though, I know preferences may play a key. But his story-telling is good story-telling

    AWinterWonderLand September 2, 2024 10:18 pm

    *good story-telling is still good story-telling, no matter the length.