Honestly

Inene September 4, 2024 10:57 pm

Okay, let's have a honest feedback. Was it good? Not specially. Was the plot good? It did have some potential. Was I into it ? No. Was the smut good? Neither, but I maybe subjective cz I'm starting to hate all smut. Was it some crazy art? No. So what's so good about this one? Another time, nothing special.

Honestly, most of the time I felt that the story was so shallow, the art make it look like some marionette moving ( the artist must be using 3D models but can't seem to make the moves more natural or blend them with the background). There's some potential like a curse, only the hero can cure it blablabla. But their relationship looks so superficial, like don't get me wrong but the only things we got form the FL or the ml are either smut, kisses, or possessiveness.
When the fl was exposed the way the things settled was meh.

Well overall. It was bad. But there's worse so let's be grateful to not have waste more time in it.

Responses
    Milkbread September 4, 2024 11:13 pm

    Can't agree more lmao

    EmilyBunny September 4, 2024 11:28 pm

    All of this, though I got a certain “guilty pleasure” initially from the cliche of everyone loving MC immediately for little to no reason. That wore off fairly quickly though and I was left only mildly interested in where the plot was going.

    Itsme September 5, 2024 1:15 am

    Heavily agree but also I still had a fun time reading it so I’m not mad it’s ending

    mc77 September 5, 2024 2:09 am

    I agree on this story but maybe u should take a break on reading smut then no point if it’s gonna annoy u yk

    Inene September 5, 2024 6:25 am
    I agree on this story but maybe u should take a break on reading smut then no point if it’s gonna annoy u yk mc77

    That's what I'm trying to do, I skip all the smut when I'm reading something for the plot or I just don't read it all together lol

    Inene September 5, 2024 6:30 am
    Heavily agree but also I still had a fun time reading it so I’m not mad it’s ending Itsme

    I'm not mad either, like I said it's bad but not the worst. Not the hateful bad ( the trash bad). Like it doesn't normalise things it shouldn't not, it just feels shallow and the art doesn't help that much.