like if I can cut some chapters off throughout the work it will be good, some of the reflection happening in later chapters is good and everything but please why is the uke getting washed down to nothing but his family problem? him losing his smart ass personality after multiple betrayals and disappointments of his family is kinda contradicting? I don't have a problem with him going back to his family multiple time cause sometimes it do be like that but can't you at least not make him an airhead while doing that? give him more? nuance?
rightttt I feel like the author got the order switch up, he was so smart before and so aware but now he kinda downgraded to this. I know smut brings bread to the table but isn't it a bit too much readers would get enough of it too it keep losing momentum, we were at the most interesting part then bam smut!
this is draaaaagging and I say this as someone who likes slow pacing but they are moving in a circle? the whole thing of him not giving up on his family and it's made worse with how, with time, he only gets dumber and dumber, even the smut is dragging, and you know it's bad when we are reaching the last arc but the problem is still dragging. like I know the ending going to be ass like woosh the problem is solved here both mc happy ever after with not reflection not growth even though the whole work is 100+ chapter (which is LONG by bl standard)