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Hm, perhaps it's some kind of prologue? You know... like a teaser or something.
actually I think a 'teaser' would be more accurate....
... since they are teasing us...><
I'm not even sure where to begin. I'm just a huge question mark. Not only did it feel like it started in the middle, it ended before it really started. So everything just felt oddly choppy. Pity as I rather think (from what I could tell) that the premise had potential. I won't give up just yet, but if this is going to be doled out in unintelligible minute bits, I'll quit.