This kind of makes me mad. Why throw away any tension for how Phil feels at the palace for...

Abel✯lied November 30, 2024 7:00 pm

This kind of makes me mad. Why throw away any tension for how Phil feels at the palace for a cheap unfunny jokes about how much the Grand mage likes her, when we knew that from previous scenes already? If the story took this moment seriously, imagine how much shit Phil would have to go through. "Oh, I heard that fake daughter made a statue of herself depicting her as an angel!" She would not be able to leave the palace!!

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    tiancy December 2, 2024 4:35 pm

    … do u want her to suffer? T^T why cant we just enjoy some comic relief for a girl who has been thru so much

    Abel✯lied December 2, 2024 7:13 pm
    … do u want her to suffer? T^T why cant we just enjoy some comic relief for a girl who has been thru so much tiancy

    Bro, yeah I want her to suffer. I want her to meet challenges and overcome them. Which don't get me wrong, I don't think it's stupid or anything to prefer a more lighthearted story, but I just dislike it when authors nonsensically patch together completely different tones.

    Is Phil in any danger in the castle? It seems like nearly everyone she meets loves her, so is there any actual opposition to her? Does she have to carefully watch her back, or is the new royal princess such a joke that she can be humiliated without consequence? Speaking of, what's her deal? Sometimes she's a manipulative mastermind, sometimes she's just a girl deluded by her mission and sometimes she's a clumsy mean spirited child.

    Of course I want her to have her happiness, but in a way that doesn't undermine the story. How about a little private tea party, with just her brothers and her new father? It would make her discover what it's like to have a normal family, not bound by politics, and it wouldn't put her in danger!

    tiancy December 3, 2024 12:06 pm
    Bro, yeah I want her to suffer. I want her to meet challenges and overcome them. Which don't get me wrong, I don't think it's stupid or anything to prefer a more lighthearted story, but I just dislike it when a... Abel✯lied

    i mean at the end of the day this is a story thats written for pure entertainment purposes. some chapters here and there will be filler. u might as well enjoy the small bouts of fun and lightheartedness in between— its not like the entire story will suddenly become fully lighthearted and humorous