kinda a mess ngl

dex ☆ December 18, 2024 3:41 am

the plot was so lost dude, this shit is not good. so much smut for no reason, no explanations on anything, left stuff unanswered and therefore unsatisfying and just simply getting annoying.
such a good potential to make something cool but it's like the author took too much onto their plate and put on the smut too heavily.

i guess nowadays that's just how stories work now, sadly. smut seems to be the main focus, which is fkn sad (i did read the tags. im aware what im getting into but it was like 80% of the whole thing and it only 58 chapters. aint even bothered to read the epilogues cuz im done with them.)

Responses
    dontlookmeup03 December 30, 2024 10:33 pm

    I definitely agree, the premise was so good so this seems like a bit of a waste
    The epilogues provide Jeurgen POV, which was not what i was expecting lowk. I think it's worth skimming thru the first half since it's short