I feel like this manwah (sp?) is entirely made of flashbacks. It feels like you get maybe a glimpse of what is happening presently but the rest is flashback. Id say 90% is flashback and if the writer uses a literary devise this much, wouldnt it have been better to just with the 2 mcs young and then show us how they met. I dunno if what i said makes any sense, sorry just ranting my opinion
I agree with ya 100% - why flashback when you could start earlier in the story and lead up to same end ya know?

I don't like this flashback interlude, I know its purpose but it just shows to confirm the Baker Boy's love for Yaoi Mangaka Fanatic Boy is fake, ugh
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