Sometimes there doesn’t need to be a “side story”

Ix0ni/a April 14, 2025 10:03 pm

This is one instance where a side plot was unnecessary—it only drags the main story down.

Each “part” feels so superficial, like the quality of the story has declined. Also, the whole topic around consent just lets the story down, like sure add BDSM, and do it well - however this was not done well souring the whole side story completely imo.

The narrative overall feels scattered and jarring.

Responses
    RNS April 14, 2025 10:51 pm

    Stfu if you don't like it don't read it

    ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

    Deez nutz April 15, 2025 12:07 am
    Stfu if you don't like it don't read it ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ RNS

    By that same logic If you don’t like the comment stfu and scroll

    sky April 15, 2025 1:47 am
    Stfu if you don't like it don't read it ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ RNS

    Grow up and let others differ ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

    simsim April 15, 2025 10:25 am
    Stfu if you don't like it don't read it ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ RNS

    and how would people know they don't like it until AFTER they read it?? yall doing too much to defend these little 2d men like bffr

    RNS April 15, 2025 11:17 am

    Lmao never said i liked or disliked the comment just replying

    Ix0ni/a April 15, 2025 1:20 pm
    Lmao never said i liked or disliked the comment just replying RNS

    You had the chance to say nothing, and missed it completely.

    RNS April 15, 2025 10:26 pm
    You had the chance to say nothing, and missed it completely. Ix0ni/a

    Womp womp

    Deez nutz April 16, 2025 7:55 pm
    Lmao never said i liked or disliked the comment just replying RNS

    I mean unless your stupid it’s obvious to see you didn’t feel positively about it