This is one instance where a side plot was unnecessary—it only drags the main story down.
Each “part” feels so superficial, like the quality of the story has declined. Also, the whole topic around consent just lets the story down, like sure add BDSM, and do it well - however this was not done well souring the whole side story completely imo.
The narrative overall feels scattered and jarring.
This is one instance where a side plot was unnecessary—it only drags the main story down.
Each “part” feels so superficial, like the quality of the story has declined. Also, the whole topic around consent just lets the story down, like sure add BDSM, and do it well - however this was not done well souring the whole side story completely imo.
The narrative overall feels scattered and jarring.