Idk what it is, but these side stories aren't working for me. The main story was nearly pe...

rhjames April 23, 2025 10:15 pm

Idk what it is, but these side stories aren't working for me. The main story was nearly perfect, but the side stories are missing the spark and strong writing of the main story. At this point if Carlyle doesn't end up pregnant or if Ash doesn't bottom at least once, the side stories will feel like a waste to me.

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    ziya April 23, 2025 11:18 pm

    righhhttttt?? And I hate how snobbish I sound everytime I say it but so truee the side stories are making me kind of dislike ash ngl

    rhjames April 24, 2025 1:16 am
    righhhttttt?? And I hate how snobbish I sound everytime I say it but so truee the side stories are making me kind of dislike ash ngl ziya

    I don't think every reader is required to love every chap of a story. And saying you don't love something isn't snobbish IMO. I pay for the chapters on another site every single week, but it's disappointing to read the side stories. Ash using sex as a weapon of torture isn't appealing in any way for me.
    But obviously some people disagree with my comment which is fine too.

    I Like Hotdogs April 24, 2025 1:47 am

    I agree, ash was kind of annoying in the side stories