Hmmm last 2-3 chapters seem kinda off to me. I can't name it tho. Something is weird. Pacing? Screen time? Shortness?? I mean, why main couple's first night interrupted by second (maybe third) couple at most important and tender chapter after all ???? Wakaranai...
I mean, their first night HAD to be interrupted. The best the author can do is allude that it happened and leave the rest to the reader's imagination; gotta keep it family friendly.
I mean, their first night HAD to be interrupted. The best the author can do is allude that it happened and leave the rest to the reader's imagination; gotta keep it family friendly. w_iju
There are other ways to keep it family friendly without cutting scene abruptly...
Hmmm last 2-3 chapters seem kinda off to me. I can't name it tho. Something is weird. Pacing? Screen time? Shortness?? I mean, why main couple's first night interrupted by second (maybe third) couple at most important and tender chapter after all ???? Wakaranai...