Hmmm last 2-3 chapters seem kinda off to me. I can't name it tho. Something is weird. Paci...

fuyuhaha April 24, 2025 1:23 am

Hmmm last 2-3 chapters seem kinda off to me. I can't name it tho. Something is weird. Pacing? Screen time? Shortness?? I mean, why main couple's first night interrupted by second (maybe third) couple at most important and tender chapter after all ???? Wakaranai...

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    w_iju April 24, 2025 1:48 am

    I mean, their first night HAD to be interrupted. The best the author can do is allude that it happened and leave the rest to the reader's imagination; gotta keep it family friendly.

    fuyuhaha April 24, 2025 11:09 am
    I mean, their first night HAD to be interrupted. The best the author can do is allude that it happened and leave the rest to the reader's imagination; gotta keep it family friendly. w_iju

    There are other ways to keep it family friendly without cutting scene abruptly...