Plot

Plot keeps dragging on.. I still don't understand how Keith hiding in prison seemed like a good idea, and if he could choose any prison why would you not choose a small one, where things like a block c don't even exist? Because small prisons definitely exist, and transferring to another prison completely is harder than an internal block transfer.

Della's mafia stuff feels made up, I don't get what he's actually doing outside besides just ordering his goons around, why does he have a warehouse? Wtf is he actually doing outside? Why is he so okay with the mafia lady trying to bring him back when they're the ones who were after him, leading to him becoming a guard?

Shit was a little interesting at first, but all the hacking shit is really unrealistic as well. Up until Keith was 17 we see he doesn't even have access to a computer and just living in the streets, he looks around his mid 20s now but to not only steal from the mafia but to hack the literal stock market would take years of experience and practice that a 17 year old can't just develop. People who do that shit were people who have been glued to their coding programs before their age even hit the double digits. I thought this would be a well drawn out plot but it seems like the author is just doing whatever these days. Della is unpredictable not because it's written well, but because half the time even the author doesn't know what they want him to do or say next.