Read the first four chapters, but there is something that just brush me the wrong way. S...

Mangoes_Pies April 30, 2025 9:56 pm

Read the first four chapters, but there is something that just brush me the wrong way.

So let me get this straight, ML seems to have a negative view on his son even calling him pathetic but dude… you are the one who raised him… you really suck as a father to make your son turn out this way. Sure, there is always outside the home as well, but you also play a big part of it as well.

Girl why would you want to marry a dude who can’t even raise his son right? Like you seen how the son is an asshole to no end, why do you think the father is better? Am I the only one not liking the ML? Sure the son seems not really redeemable, but like he couldn’t have been like that as a child right?

But yeah the art is really good though!

Responses
    Ray ray lit April 30, 2025 11:12 pm

    What I get from the story so far was the son was always evil form the day of adoption . im not sure tho also it implies she need to married into the family or something horrible will happen.

    jamme82736 May 1, 2025 11:26 am

    I know right. This story does brush me the wrong way too. It is like son verse father, over the fl, which is weird. Also, when they were talking over the marriage contract, ml said he never have a lover or something, but how was he able to have two son, unless he just want a child. Like where the son mother or what happen to her. The story doesn't even mention that which make me curious. Also, he seem like a bad father to both of his son. The only good thing about the story is that fl is strong, and ml is good looking, and the son is cute. And that it lol

    Mangoes_Pies May 1, 2025 2:10 pm

    Uh makes sense, but that’s just pitiful to make him a bad person ever since his adoption… if he was an orphan he must have wanted for a family making him evil is just sad.

    Yeah the son vs father is weird, and just the fact that ML wanted to have children but not even taking care of them properly, kinda piss me off. Children are not toys, you can’t just wish for a child, adopt one and not even taking proper care of them. For once a FL is strong an independent we have a ML that’s meh. Sad.

    Lindo May 1, 2025 4:00 pm

    the ML clearly stated in the next chapters that he had no other choice but to adopt them, he trued to bond with the oldest one but was shocked by his twisted personslity (he was besting up his tutor), he alsosaid it was probably his biological fathers influence which made him twisted and crazy

    Lindo May 1, 2025 4:00 pm

    the ML clearly stated in the next chapters that he had no other choice but to adopt them, he trued to bond with the oldest one but was shocked by his twisted personality (he was besting up his tutor), he also said it was probably his biological fathers influence which made him twisted and crazy

    Mangoes_Pies May 1, 2025 4:04 pm

    Understandable